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All my exs fumbled the bag. Could’ve been traveling the world together but they stuck at home going 50/50 with brokie...

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All my exs fumbled the bag. Could’ve been traveling the world together but they stuck at home going 50/50 with brokies 😂

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What worked

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Relatability of the topic (dealing with exes) combined with a luxurious, aspirational setting.

▸Deep analysis

Relatability of the topic (dealing with exes) combined with a luxurious, aspirational setting.

How to steal it

setting · penthousedevice · other
  1. 01
    Hook (0-2s)

    Open with the "exes lost, I leveled up" beat. No intro card, no logo, no greeting.

    Brickell · Roll camera before you arrive at your Flow Brickell penthouse — Miami skyline through the glass. The reveal IS the hook.

  2. 02
    Set the frame (2-4s)

    Establish penthouse with phone. Wide on the 16mm so the GT3 RS sells the scale.

    Brickell · Keep the prop count to 1. More props = more cuts = lower retention.

  3. 03
    Payoff (4-9s)

    Use other to deliver the rewatch moment. One idea, one take.

    Brickell · Cut on the reaction, not the line. If it's a price reveal, hold the number on screen for 1.5s.

  4. 04
    Reaction / proof (9-13s)

    Show the consequence. Bystander head-turn, valet face, on-screen receipt — whatever makes the payoff feel real.

    Brickell · Casa Tua and Komodo valets are cinematic. E11even paddock for nightlife crowd. Hard Rock paddock during F1 weekend = prebuilt audience.

Your version

Alex-voiced hooks · luxury_view_flex3/3
Variant 1

Everyone who told me quitting ZoomInfo was stupid is still at a desk.

Film walking through the Brickell penthouse at golden hour, panning from the floor-to-ceiling windows to the Miami skyline. Story beat: coworkers called him crazy for leaving his #1 AE spot at 22, now they watch his life from cubicles.

Variant 2

My old managers could've hired me back. Now my GT3 RS costs more than their house.

Open on the $500k Porsche GT3 RS parked in the Brickell garage, camera slow-panning across the wing. Tone is funny, not bitter. The people who doubted the move are the punchline, and the car is the receipt.

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  • 05
    CTA / outro (13-15s)

    Implicit beats explicit. Let the caption + pinned comment ask. End on the asset, not your face.

    Brickell · Tag @imalexgunnar in the caption. Pin the objection comment within 60s of posting.

  • Props checklist
    • ✓phone
    Where in Miami
    • Gas station · Shell SW 8th + Brickell Ave (24/7, premium pump, clean lighting).
    • Valet · Casa Tua, Komodo, E11even — pull-up + handoff is the cinematic moment.
    • Penthouse · Flow Brickell roof or your unit. Skyline backdrop reads premium.
    • Track / paddock · Hard Rock paddock during F1 weekend = pre-built audience.
    • Cold start · Brickell Ave south of 8th at 6:30am — empty street, hard light.
    Variant 3

    Every brand that ghosted my first pitch now pays OVO six figures to book my creators.

    Film at the desk with a laptop showing campaign dashboards. Story: early cold emails to Nike and Gymshark got ignored, now those same brands are recurring OVO clients. The rejection was the setup, the roster was the punchline.